Sunday, April 11, 2010

Mysterys

The crime in a mystery is when the villain strikes and does something against the law. It's when victims are picked on and it's the time in which the villain becomes a villain for he does something wrong. Without a crime there would be no victim, witness, villain, evidence and clues. Without those there are no suspects, alibis, red herrings, and the mystery that the detective is trying to solve. Without those there is no steps to follow or danger to avoid. And without those there will not be a surprise ending because it's BORING.





The detective is the good guy who goes off and solves the mystery. He finds all the important clues, he has the important jobs, he figures out the important plan, he finds the important villains and is very important. Without the detective the villain would win and take over the world or lose interest because there isn't any challenge. The other possibilities are the police go round trying to stop him and calling the army which then creates WW III just to find him.








The Villain is the bad guy of the mystery. He's the one who commits the crime and the one the good guys spend the whole story trying to figure out who he is and then capturing him. If there were no villain there would be no crime. If there was no crime, (see crime). They usually try to throw the detective off the trail by throwing a red herring at him so it takes him a wile to wipe all the fish oil off. He my also try and dispose of him if he's getting too close by throwing him into a trash can.








Victims are the people that the villains pick on. They could have been sent wrong information or even murdered. If you poke someone they are the victim of that poke. If there was no victim the villain would do nothing there for not becoming a villain, (If you wont to continue the chain look at Villain). pay attention signs or you my become a victim.





The suspects are people who could be the villain. every living thing is a suspect. They start with the univers and narrow it down to Earth where they narrow it down to humans. Then it is narrowed down to people who were involved in the crime because the villain was involved in it by cammiting it. One by one they narrow people off the list until they find the villain. But then the person isn't the villain because it's a surprise endding.







The suspense in a mystery is when the villain is trying to throw the detective in the trash can. The usual circumstances are car chase, an attempt of killing him, or a garbage dump. This usually occurs near the end or at the end or when he's near a garbage dump. It's a time when the people reading or watching are on the edge of their seats, and sometimes fall off and miss the exciting part or lose there place in the book.

6 comments:

TibetFanRinzin said...

I like your suspects image. It's funny.

yohannes dennis said...

I like your pictures they are very clever and your writting was over the top good

William Ciputra said...

Lots of writing. Tells why each element is important. Victim pick is funny.

faqeera said...

Good job Stuart! Nice writing, it's really detailed and I like the picture for suspense. Fits nicely.

alona beloussova said...

Good job! I like your suspense picture because there would be suspense when someone is walking across a rope!

Tobinsky said...

I like your pictures. Good job. Your write is good.